Resume help: How does my resume look?
- Filed under: Advertising Business Internet Marketing
- Date: Nov 18,2009
David Cho
6363 Beadnell Way Apt 137
San Diego, CA 92117
Telephone: (858) 357 5537
Email: davidcho89@live.com
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SEEKING: Entry level sales/marketing position.
SKILLS
• Over 2 years of cashier and customer interaction experience
• Superb customer service skills
• Demonstrated ability to independently learn new skills, handle stress, and solve problems
• Familiar with MS Word, Excel, Photoshop, additional computer programs/software
• Building and maintaining strong working relationships with customers, peers and management
• Familiar with advertising/marketing through internet business
• Dynamic and positive personality; comfortable taking charge and quickly adapting to change
• Excellent communication skills: influential communication, persuasion and negotiation
• Recognized ability to develop and maintain rapport with customers
• Experienced in self-managing work efforts to complete work in a timely manner while maintaining high standard of quality
• Take personal responsibility for all work outcomes; thrive in competitive, fast-paced environments; excellent work ethic
• Sound analytical and problem solving skills
EDUCATION & CERTIFICATIONS
High School Diploma, Garfield High School,
San Diego, CA
Currently: Major-Business-Mesa College,
San Diego, CA
Computer Skills: MS Word, Excel
EXPERIENCE
Zion Market, San Diego, CA 09/2005-11/2007
Cashier
• Provide excellent customer service by assisting and tending to customers
• Process customer purchases
• Maintain and balance cash drawer
• Process monetary transactions
Ebay business, Home Office
Selling cameras through Ebay auctions
• Designed and developed high quality descriptions of product
• Processed monetary transactions over the internet
• Advertise/market products
• Communication with customers/potential customers on a daily basis
• Self run business
COMMUNITY ACTIVITIES
Leader in the youth group of See World Baptist Church
Hi -
I think you could definitely land a job with your resume.
However, since you asked, here are some of my thoughts:
1. You need to condense your listings under "skills" – some of it is kind of wordy, and some of it isn’t really skills. You should delete some of them from the resume, and instead include it in your Cover Letter.
For example, in your cover letter, you could say, "I feel I would be an excellent employee because I thrive in competitive, fast-paced environments; have an excellent work ethic, etc…… you could also say, that you have demonstrated ability to independently learn new skills, handle stress, and solve problems, etc… in your cover letter, that really isn’t appropriate under "skills". The same goes for "Dynamic and positive personality; comfortable taking charge and quickly adapting to change"…..
Remember, lots of WHITE SPACE is good in resumes!
2. You need to include the year that you graduate high school and what years you have been attending college. You also should include your GPA.
3. You need to move "computer skills" under skills
4. Some of the description under your Zion Market jobs is redundant, "Maintain and balance cash drawer" is basically the same thing as "Process monetary transactions" and "Process customer purchases".
5. Some of the verbs are in present tense "advertise/market products" and some are in past tense "Designed and developed high quality descriptions of product".
6. "Self Run Business" is kind of a given and doesn’t need to be included. Actually I think you need to condense the description under Ebay Business.
7. You need to include a description under your youth group volunteer job – Also, I think it should be "Youth Group Leader" instead.
Truthfully, I think you should take your resume to a professional to help you out. Your college should have a career office that should help you.
But I still think you could get a job.
Good Luck.

